Friday, 20 November 2015

One day the sun was shining brightly and the lovely birds were singing.Our classroom,five were performing the stick game on stage.MY friend Told me when we were up on stage SING LOUDER!!!we were all singing e papa-waiari .It took us days of practice to get it absolutely perfect. I got it wrong a couple of times but in a couple of weeks I got it into my head.That we needed to be AWESOME on stage
that THURSDAY we were all perfect at singing and at the sticks all of us had red cheeks and was sweating.I LOVED PERFORMING I HOPE WE DO IT AGAIN.


  1. Good work but make shore you put some adverb and descriptions.